Wednesday, September 23, 2009

RED CARNATIONS




On a very bright morn,

When i was feeling forlorn

Unheralded, they arrived

With love's depth mirrored

For a lonely heart in wait

A gift that seemed so right

Bridging a million miles

Lit up my face in smiles

Carnations with red petals

Had love hidden in sepals...
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4 comments:

  1. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"September 27, 2009 at 3:42 AM

    very sweetly written :)

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  2. UnknownOctober 4, 2009 at 11:33 AM

    chandu
    really..nice poem


    With love's depth mirrored

    For a lonely heart in wait

    A gift that seemed so right

    Bridging a million miles
    wow
    nice
    wht more we can gift to spread the shower of love n concern in the jungle of darkness n hate n lust spreading like jungle grass ..we have to face it widour gr8 concern n love n smile....gr8 one thanx

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  3. ShreeOctober 16, 2009 at 4:34 PM

    very beautiful n soul stirring...

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  4. Gita K VaidyanathanDecember 31, 2010 at 2:55 PM

    very predictable....I think I vote Time poem a better one :)

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