O …time,
If you ever will
To stand forever still
If you ever decide
To step forever aside
I would rainbow ride
In eternity reside
Do all things magical
Visit all places mystical
Capture nature’s beauty
In the mind’s eye
And fill my heart
With infinite joy.
I think in this poem you concentrated in rhyming or call it rhythm...not that I am good at writing poems, but I would give a 6 out of 10. Just as an audience :)
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